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Old 04-09-2007, 12:10 PM
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Well, it doesn't appear suggesting scenes is particularly common around here but I've had an idea I was throwing around for a while I think would be an outsanding, fun project here at Little Mutt. I wrote a little script of how it might go, but I am by no means suggesting you merely reproduce this - it's just more of something along the lines of...

«Amber & Alex are cuddled up in bed in a dark bedroom wearing panties and a cute, comfy shirt for sleeping. The alarm clock goes from 4:59 to 5:00am and begins sounding. Amber reaches over Alex and smacks the “snooze” but Alex gets up and flicks on the lights.»
Alex: We can’t be late for our first day at the hospital!
Amber: Ugh! It’s too early!
«Pulling on Amber’s arm» Alex: Come on Amber! Sleepyhead! Amberrrr!
Amber: Fine, Alex! Jeez! I’m getting up! «pause» At least we didn’t get the overnight shift... we'd never get any sleep at all! «pausing, then saying with a giggle» Although I guess sometimes we don't get much "sleep" as it is...
«Amused, but pretending to be offended so she gives a playful slap to an innocent looking Amber»Alex: Amber!!
«Eventually Amber finally sits up and, satisfied, Alex goes into the bathroom and starts the shower. Amber sits there waking up. Alex walks back and leans in the doorway, wearing only her shirt.»
«Playfully, with a kick of her hips to the side» Alex: Come on!
«Alex swings around and heads back into the bathroom, and Amber chases after her.»

«Cut to the shower»
Alex: Finally!
«Amber takes off her PJs and slips in behind Alex, who is already in the shower. Amber embraces Alex from behind and starts lathering the front of her body. After a short while Alex turns around and the two touch noses then kiss gently.»
«Softly» Alex: Turn around, Amber.
«Amber turns around and Alex washes her. Alex runs her hand between Amber’s legs, sending a quick shiver throughout her body. Alex kisses Amber on the neck and gives her a quick nibble on the ear.»
«Whispering, and somewhat suddenly disappointed» Alex: We better finish getting ready.
«Alex pulls away and turns off the shower. The two girls dry each other off and start getting ready. The girls chat about their upcoming first shifts at their new jobs (or anything else, for that matter).»

«Cut back to the bedroom, some time has passed and the girls have finished with their hair and everything. Alex comes in and puts on her scrubs. Amber enters and walks up next to Alex.»
Amber: God, Alex, you are so cute in those!
«Amber gives Alex a quick kiss, then the two gaze into each others’ eyes for a short moment and begin kissing passionately. The two girls progress into some toy-free girly sex. Afterward, the girls collapse into the bed and lay in each other’s arms for a moment. Amber realizes what time it is and ends up reminding Alex they’re about to be late. In a hurry, they throw on their scrubs, with no time to put on their underwear.»
Amber: Crap! We're totally going ot be late!
Alex: Hurry! Come on, come on!

«Cut inside to the front door. Amber & Alex grab their things and run out the door holding hands.»


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The idea is to capture a "real" morning between two good friends. Since this is covering a wide range of events I understand it makes it more complicated and might run a little long, so I hope that wouldn't be a problem. I am thinking of the shower scene as being sweet and sensual, but not that explicit because the girls are actually taking a shower getting ready for their big day. I'd imagine a minute or two of waking up, 10 or so in the shower, a couple minutes drying off and getting ready, and then obviously it would be a little dull to show their entire morning so cut to after they've finished getting ready (which I didn't want to script at all, though it is clearly the biggest and most important part of the video) where the two girls actually have sex. Also, I think it would be really, really cute to include the girls waking up together but since it is supposed to be early for their early shift it would need to be dark at least until they get out of the shower and that might be inconvenient to shoot. Hopefully these concerns (and any others you or the models have) won't hold you back!

Alex & Amber are just fantastic together and I really loved the Student Nurses videos. I figure the girls' hard work should have paid off for them and they deserve to have passed their tests and get hired as nurses! I also thought this could make another good use of those scrubs you had fixed up, Sal! I would definitely want you to get your money's worth out of them! So, I hope you consider this proposal because I really think this is doable and would be absolutely great! More importantly, I hope this is something Alex & Amber would be interested in!
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Old 04-11-2007, 05:00 AM
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Wow, I love it. I hope Sal and Alex like it too. I just hope that Amber is still available. I bet if Alex asked she'd be onboard.

Thanks for taking the time to put this together. I know it took some time.
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Old 04-23-2007, 02:19 PM
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Awesome job, 1337....WOW!! Why hasn't Sal replied to this thread yet? Hopefully this scene or a variation of it will be at least thought of by Sal.
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Old 04-24-2007, 06:32 PM
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Sal has been busy shooting lately... I haven't really been able to hang out with him at our office like we usually do... he should be in on Thursday though and I am going to make sure he gets on this forum. That goes for the Lady as well.

Great idea for a video by the way.

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Old 04-24-2007, 06:58 PM
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I'm here! I'm here! I will suggest this idea to Sal, maybe even for one of the girl/girl scenes we're shooting this week!
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Old 04-26-2007, 10:57 AM
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Thanks for the positive feedback everybody!

While I'm at it, I might as well make a request. I saw a video the other day and this part really jumped out at me as totally awesome! I'd love to see more of this kind of tenderness shot and worked into an actual quality video.

And talk about luck, Alex & Amber have done it before (see attachment)!
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Old 06-02-2007, 03:06 PM
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Smile Great idea for a scene

I'll work on it. Alex Venice really liked it too.
1337 I liked the tenderness between the two girls in the video clip but the execution was strickly amateur. Do you really like some guy appearing in the frame and taking pictures? Wrecked it for me. I can't believe there are still sites doing that.
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Old 06-04-2007, 08:46 PM
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Oh goodness no, I was strictly talking about what the girls were doing! I don't know or like anything else about that clip other than that little snippet, I can only hope it was part of some 'behind the scenes' feature. I just meant I personally like the tenderness, and thought Little Mutt (with high production quality) pulls it off much better! There's just something about the behind-the-back angle I find irresistible.
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